The Baby Tortoise


Posted by Mrs Carlucci | Posted in Uncategorized | Posted on 28-09-2017

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Terry was scared. He thought the world was scary. He wanted to stay with his mother.

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Terry was worried about all the danger of the world. He was frightened and he felt safe with his mum.

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